Joaquin Miller
In his writing, Joaquin speaks about the ocean and atmosphere around him in California including the Sierras and the snow beyond. He seems to be taken aback by the majesty of the area. He speaks of the ocean and the mines and the opportunities that lie within for the miners and opportunities for trade across the sea. The opportunities that await all those that venture there. The way he describes the ocean it's as if he is using it as a metaphor for the endless opportunities he sees in California during this time period. Being somewhat of a blank slate, so to speak, the opportunity to build a life would be up to those brave enough to make the journey. The lives they choose to create out of this environment would be completely up to them and how they wish their lives to be. This no doubt had some influence in his decision to return to California and make his home in the Oakland Hills after traveling abroad and establishing himself as a writer.
He believes that once the world discovers how beautiful California is, that they will want to develop the area into cities and people will come from all parts of the world to see it. That they are living history that will be talked about in years to come. They will be remembered as the pioneers of the area. He is spiritually connected and inspired. He declares that God's creations deserve reverence and is aware of just how insignificant he as one person is. His connection to the world surrounding him is reflected in the way he writes. Being spiritually connected to his environment may have played into his later bohemian lifestyle. Being born in Indiana, this may have been his first time seeing the ocean. This would be an amazing experience for him especially after such a long journey westward in a covered wagon.
Hello Rhiannon,
ReplyDeleteI did not read this story but you insightful analysis piqued my curiosity about its theme. It seems that Miller was a visionary as he could see the potential of a drab and uninhabited place before the realization of its popularity. Your description of Joaquin as an enlightened mid-westerner, who was aware if his own significance tells a lot about his character. The idea that he had not seen the ocean before coming to California caused me to wonder what his first impressions of it were. As you suggested, his bohemian life-style may have contributed to his bold optimistic feelings towards his adopted state.
Hi Rhiannon. As I read this story I thought that it was very interesting but at the same time it was sad because of how much he changed due to the injustices that he faced. I think if he would not have suffered those acts like seeing his women ravished and being thrown out of his other job than he would not have changed or grown a sense of despite for Americans.
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday Rhiannon!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great analysis of this story. I really enjoyed reading about the metaphor, and think it is really how people describe and see California, endless opportunties. So many people come here for a different life and more opportunties. California truly has some of the most beautiful views, from the mountains, valleys, oceans, and all of the areas in between. Great job.
Hello again Rhiannon.
ReplyDeleteI read your most recent post on 3/17, and came here to look at some more of your work! I feel as thought this was another great analysis. I appreciate that you understand the power of metaphors, and how they can make your analysis stronger. Great work, once again!