Rhiannon Pinson
English 205
March 10, 2019
Project 1 Submission
In reading “The Squatter and the
Don” we get a first-hand look at history through the eyes of someone experiencing
the injustices of racism and broken promises from the United States. Through her experience and writing, we can
better learn from the mistakes in our past and better ourselves for the future.
At the
age of 16, Maria and her mother are moved to Monterey, California after the Treaty
of Guadalupe Hidalgo in 1869. When this
treaty was signed, all citizens were given the option for citizenship to the
United States of to Mexico. Those who
chose the United States were moved farther North to Monterey and its surrounding
areas. Maria and her mother were some of
the 480 Baja Californians that were relocated as a condition of this
Treaty. The Treaty guaranteed all
citizens a fair representation under the law and an opportunity to own land. We find that in “The Squatter and the Don”
that Maria sheds light on the reality of this false claim.
Maria’s
novel published in 1885 was the first novel by a Mexican American woman. This expose presents the reader with the
injustices Mexican Americans faced as a result of the Treaty of Guadalupe Hidalgo. She exposes the hypocrisy of the land laws that
clearly favor the rights of the squatter’s as they believe the land, they are
claiming stake to, belongs to the United States and is therefore, theirs for
the taking. During the times where these
men are claiming land as their own, it is shown that this land actually belongs
to the Mexican Americans but the developed “land commissions” require that the
Mexican American citizens further prove that the land is truly theirs while
also allowing the squatters to kill cattle without consequences and develop on
land while the rightful owners continue to pay taxes on it. With the laws and odds stacked against them,
it is not doubt disheartening and discouraging to the Mexican Americans who
rightfully own this land and have been promised equal rights under American
law.
During
this time, Maria paints a picture of how a proud man and father can lose
hope. We see that he acknowledges that
the laws are unfair but that he is powerless to change them. This speaks to the strength of his character
but also speaks to the overwhelming power of unjust laws. He and his family have built a life for
themselves on a ranch sustaining cattle and the land. The unfairness of laws built to further the
privilege of a few while disparaging another purely based on race is unfortunately
something we see repeatedly through our history books. However, the stories we are taught in
schools, are often told from the perspective of the oppressors and not the
oppressed. This leads to a one sided and
biased story. With Maria’s account, we
get a rare glimpse of the story from another perspective. This perspective is exactly why Maria’s story
can be considered an artifact of history.
Maria paints a picture of her story
from the opposite perspective of how history lessons are typically taught. Hard subject matters are often glazed over to
paint the United States in a better light.
We are not taught about how violent missionaries were when taking over
areas and forcing religion upon them. We
are not taught about all the broken promises of treaties established with
Native Americans and Mexican Americans.
We are not taught about how often the United States created laws to intentionally
disadvantage a group of people based on race.
It is imperative that we read stories like this one presented by Maria in
order to give readers the full picture.
Without different perspectives, it would be impossible to look at history
without bias. Without learning from our
history, it would be impossible not to repeat our mistakes.
Hi Rhiannon, I found this story very interesting and insightful and I enjoyed reading it. At first glance, your essay seems to be on the short side that is required of us so maybe lengthing would be a good start and it is something you might want to work on. Your topic sentence and thesis seem to be clear and it is pretty straight forward but I think you can give the reader a bit more context and introduce the topic you have chosen to write about as well as adding in who the of the author is of the reading may be helpful. You have discussed a lot of facts about the book and different details which while that is good you need a better analysis of the information you have stated. I think pulling out different quotes from the reading to analysis would be a good idea and strengthen your writing. I am excited to read your other revisions on this project, nice job so far.
ReplyDeleteHi Rhiannon, what if you lengthen the first paragraph? What if you moved the information in the second paragraph to the first paragraph? I like how in the fourth paragraph you wrote that the author painted a picture of how a proud man and father can lose hope. I like that you pointed out that in history books we repeatedly see how laws are not fair to some races. I also liked that you pointed out the history books are written by the oppressors and not the oppressed. I did not even think of that before. I really liked your conclusion. You made many valid points in your project. What if you add more to your project? Don't you think that you can discuss more, give us more information? What if you elaborate more on what this story teaches us about history and use quotes to support that? Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHi Rhiannon I enjoyed reading your project and the perspective and insight you gave us. First think I wanted to say is that you did a great job making sure that you gave a clear thesis and the textual evidence to support it. I did think that the intro could be lengthened by providing more examples or examples that you are going to use later or go more into detail as you progress. I really liked how you shed light on how history books like to tell only one side of the story and that most times we are left wondering how others felt throughout that time and what they experienced as a result of having to give up their land and the treatment they received. I think that it would be a great idea to use more quotes from the book instead of a more broad summary but overall it was a great project.
ReplyDeleteHi Rhiannon!
ReplyDeleteI can tell you have a good understanding of what “The Squatter and the Don” was about and the message the author was intending to share. It is important to keep in mind and focus on the purpose of the projects in this class which is to analyze the writing and not summarize. I think you did a great job of seeing beyond the writing and analyzing, but I think direct quotes would help shape your arguments / the points you are trying to make. I did not read this story myself so I am a little confused on whether or not this was a true story about the author or not. Perhaps referencing specific characters (other than Maria) throughout your project would be helpful. Finally, when referencing the author in a formal essay or paper, you should try to use their last name instead of their first.
This was a great first project. Please know, most of my comments are simply reaffirming to remind myself!